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When you sense something is wrong

You are work­ing on a project and you have a nag­ging sense that the book is not going well. You work on your text, and you change, this, that, and the oth­er thing. Small stuff, real­ly. Been there. Done that. The neg­a­tive nag­ging per­sists. If you are a reader—and I do not know how you

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The key to suspense

Mol­ly, a sev­enth grad­er from San­té Fe, New Mex­i­co, asks, “I want to write sus­pense­ful books. How do you make them that way?”  Mol­ly, there are many ways to answer this ques­tion. First, your plot has to have an aura of poten­tial dis­as­ter, dan­ger, or threat. While there is noth­ing wrong with mak­ing that dan­ger concrete,

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You must remember this …

It may seem bizarre to sug­gest it, but when writ­ing a nov­el, one of the most cru­cial things to have is mem­o­ry, mem­o­ry of what you your­self have writ­ten. There are sim­ple mix-ups, such as when a char­ac­ter says to anoth­er char­ac­ter, “Let’s meet at sev­en, “ and you for­get and have the meet­ing at

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See you on the radio

In ear­ly March, I had a Skype vis­it with a school in the Down East Maine town of Pow­nal. (They told me it was minus sev­en degrees that day, “and that’s not includ­ing the wind-chill fac­tor.”) A stu­dent asked which char­ac­ter in which of my books, was most like me when I was a kid.

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A forced march

Ques­tion: How long does it take before you like what you are writ­ing? Answer: it can take a long time.  Pro­fes­sion­al writ­ers write for many rea­sons. Not the least of them is to make a liv­ing. There is a famous writ­ing sto­ry about Charles Dick­ens. His pub­li­ca­tion, House­hold Words, had been run­ning a ser­i­al, which was

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Taking time

Last Octo­ber I had an idea for a new book. I did what I usu­al­ly do: I began to read about the sub­ject, try­ing to grab hold of the idea in a more con­crete fash­ion. After a cou­ple of months of ran­dom, not very focused thought, I took my usu­al next step. I tried writing

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Tightrope walking

I am work­ing on a book, which, for want of a bet­ter term, aspires to be a page-turn­er. Full of sus­pense and sur­pris­es, it’s meant to be a gal­lop­ing nar­ra­tive. When one writes this kind of book, there are always vital issues of pac­ing. One of the spe­cif­ic con­cerns is how a chap­ter is constructed—not

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Making the case

The oth­er day I was vis­it­ing a high school class. When I was tak­ing ques­tions, a ninth grad­er asked me how I go about putting sym­bol­ism and hid­den mean­ings in my books. When I replied that I do not put hid­den mean­ings and sym­bol­ism in my books, the boy’s response was, “But my teacher is

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Writing tighter

I was just review­ing a new man­u­script with an edi­tor. Her pri­ma­ry com­ment was, “It needs to be tighter.”  It would be easy to say that she meant, “the text needs to be cut.” How­ev­er, to me, tighter means pace, dri­ve, tempo—overall, the for­ward mov­ing ener­gy of the sto­ry. This is par­tic­u­lar­ly nec­es­sary for today’s

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Short Story Collection

Over the years, I have writ­ten a num­ber of short sto­ries. There are two col­lec­tions, Strange Hap­pen­ings (five sto­ries) and What Do Fish Have to Do with Any­thing? (sev­en sto­ries). Now and again, I have con­tributed to var­i­ous the­mat­ic antholo­gies, some sev­en (I think) in num­ber, includ­ing When I Was Your Age.  A few years

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